This one looks pretty good. I am not in love with the military training but is isn’t bad.
Brecht
Racial TraitsAverage Height: 5’6”- 6’2”
Average Weight: 135 – 220 lbsAbility Scores: +2 Dex, +2 to other ability of your choice.
Size: Medium
Speed: 6
Vision: NormalLanguages: Low Brecht and choice of two others.
Bonus At-Will Power: You know 1 extra At-Will power from your class.
Brechtur Fencing Proficiency: You gain proficiency with the rapier and parrying dagger. While you are wielding a rapier & parrying dagger and wearing light or no armor you gain a +1 bonus to AC. This stacks with the parrying daggers defensive properties.
Skill Bonus: +2 Bluff, +2 Perception
Defense Bonus: +2 to Ref
This is pretty good all around other than the special fencing proficiency. This bonus will only apply to a small amount of warrior types and no other classes. We need to try to make it so a greater amount of classes can enjoy the benefit.
Is it too powerful to have a simply +1 bonus to AC if you are wearing light or no armor? Also include they have bonus proficiency to rapier and parrying dagger.
Khinasi
Racial TraitsAverage Height: 5’6”- 6’2”
Average Weight: 135 – 220 lbsAbility Scores: +2 Int, +2 to other ability of your choice.
Size: Medium
Speed: 6
Vision: NormalLanguages: Basarji and choice of two others
Bonus At-Will Power: You know 1 extra At-Will power from your class.
Khinasi Education: Chose one of the following at character creation. You gain +1 to arcane attacks due to your education in magic or You gain 10% discount to all equipment (mundane and magical) due to your education in mercantile endeavors.
Skill Bonus: +2 Diplomacy, +2 Arcana
Defense Bonus: +2 to Ref
Khinasi education is a little clunky. The either or is a little strange because they look like they might work well together. This is a great example of having a Khinasi racial bonus feat. Here is how it would look…
Bonus Feat: You can pick one extra feat from the Khinasi racial Feats.
Khinasi Racial Feats:
Magical Defense: Those that hail from Khinasi have grown up with magic being a part of their lives. Because of this many people from Khanasi know how to defend themselves if attacked by a magic users. +1 def vs arcane attacks.
Magical Apptitude: Wizards that hail from Khinasi have an extensive amount of resources to become successful wizards. +1 to Arcane attacks.
Mercantile Endeavors: 10% discount on all items because of the strong guild system built in Khinasi and the natural understand all folks have for them.
They will also have access to these feats as they level taking one of these instead of a class or standard feat.
Rjurik
Racial TraitsAverage Height: 5’8”- 6’4”
Average Weight: 145 – 230 lbsAbility Scores: +2 Con, +2 to other ability of your choice.
Size: Medium
Speed: 6
Vision: NormalLanguages: Rjuven, Anuirean
Bonus At-Will Power: You know 1 extra At-Will power from your class.
Rjurik Hardiness: You can use your second wind twice in an encounter.
Skill Bonus: +2 Nature, +2 Endurance
Defense Bonus: +2 to Fort
I think this one is perfect.
Vos
Racial TraitsAverage Height: 5’8”- 6’4”
Average Weight: 145 – 230 lbsAbility Scores: +2 Str, +2 to other ability of your choice.
Size: Medium
Speed: 6
Vision: NormalLanguages: Vos, Goblin or Abyssal
Bonus At-Will Power: You know 1 extra At-Will power from your class.
Barbaric Rage: While you are bloodied, you gain a +2 bonus to damage rolls on melee attacks. This increases to +4 at 11th level and +6 at 21st level.
Skill Bonus: +2 Nature, +2 Intimidate
Defense Bonus: +2 to Fort
This is great. Not sure about Abyssal.