Well off the top of my head I see the following corrections needed to be done:
As the bloodline scores have gone back to the original rules, the NPCs described should have their bloodline scores changed.
Liliene Swordwraith should have a scion level.
The following sentence should have a comma as highlighted in bold:
"Soon after, she was proclaimed queen by the joyous nobles and commoners and coronated by her good friend, Ursula Diem, a priestess of Nesirie. "
From The naval battle system book Aerenwe’s navy is composed of: 2 Galleons, 6 caravels, 2 coasters out of Calrie with a sea trade route from Calrie to Mermoune in Binsada. Calrie thus should have a seaport.
Other than that here are my suggestions for some changes:
Armies: I would suggest 1 unit of rangers of the erebannien, either a scout or irregular unit.
Fortifications: A castle in Calrie would be appropriate.
Vassals: None, although the ETN and SRT do contribute to the Queen’s treasury in some form or fashion I can imagine.
Payments: Some form of monetary support for William Moergan and/or Roesone.
Highways: The high population levels of Calrie, Dhoenal, and Halried would lead one to believe that highways do exist. The Erebannien however should not have any further improvements except for maybe a fortified holding for High Mage Aelies.
Adventure Ideas:
Silence from the Erebannien: Communication with the High Mage has become more and more erratic as of late. Last word from him came over a year ago and while this is not uncommon, those that think to wage war upon Aerenwe have long taken pause due to the power at Aelies’ disposal. If they were to learn of the High Mage’s silence, Aerenwe’s neutrality might be tested.
The weeping souls: Rumours have begun to circulate in the northern fringes of the realm of apparitions in the bogs and swamps. Mostly women and children, these souls all show the signs of brutal and violent deaths. In what few eyewitness accounts report, they wail the name of Swordwraith during their hauntings. May these souls be victims of Reynard Gavriel’s tyranny that Queen Lilliene was not able to save?
Player Secrets:
Arms of Aerenwe: Although no longer as martial as she once was, the Queen does still bear them on occasions. Chief among them is Swordwraith, a gift from the High Mage. This magical longsword +4 of dancing is named such for some claim when the Queen activates the dancing power, the wisps of an ethereal being are seen wielding the blade. Her offhand weapon is a seemingly plain hunting knife. It does bear a slight enchantment that allows the wilder to throw the weapon without penalties due to range increments. Lastly is a suit of shadowed elven chain mail +2 rumoured to have been looted from an sidhelien ruin deep in the heart of the Erebannien.
The Queen’s companions: Many of the Queen’s companions back during the time of her liberation of the Aerenwean people still reside within Aerenwe. Many of which chose to lead lives of adventuring for many years afterwards before settling down. Were Aerenwe to suffer a serious attack, there is no doubt these men and women of considerable experience would come to the aid of their beloved friend and Queen.